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6 May 2007, 15:12
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: roma
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my art...
a worm with emblem of my student community!
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6 May 2007, 16:05
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Join Date: October 2004
Location: Brighton
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That's pretty damned nice. I can see the reference picture you used in it though. A couple of suggestions -
1) Work on the tail area, make it shorter and less pointy. 2) Try not to do a complete imitation of the artwork you're using. Try different ways of drawing the eyes, for example, and make it generally more stylised.
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6 May 2007, 16:24
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Join Date: March 2005
Location: Isles Of Scilly, UK
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Very good. Not so sure about the darker side of the worm, the colour looks a bit odd and, as mentioned before, the tail needs a touch of work.
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6 May 2007, 16:24
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Join Date: March 2005
Location: Isles Of Scilly, UK
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Very good. Not so sure about the darker side of the worm, the colour looks a bit odd and, as mentioned before, the tail needs a touch of work.
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6 May 2007, 19:15
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Join Date: December 2002
Location: ‰‰‰R
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We heard you the first time, tgworm.
 Also, you pretty much just copied that from the concept art pic, why don't you show us something that comes straight from your brain?
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7 May 2007, 00:00
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: roma
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i can't show u something that come only form my brain beacause i don't draw very well.... so i only redraw another picture with a little change
but.. i can try.... |
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7 May 2007, 11:18
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Join Date: February 2005
Location: Devon, Southwest England.
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I say keep copying for now because copying is the best way to learn.
I say the tail is fine, just make it shorter.
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7 May 2007, 17:28
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Join Date: December 2002
Location: Foundation of Ciskenites
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Eat his eyeballs for greater pleasure!
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